Revision work

Overall:
My essay describes my writing process.
It does this by explaining the steps in my process and describing it in a physical way, the way elbow encourages. It expresses the way my process appears, smells, and sounds.

Paragraph 1:
This paragraph introduces the topic of the text.
It clearly explains what the rest of the paper will describe. It expresses the topic of each paragraph.

Paragraph 2:
This paragraph explains how my writing process physically appears.
It compares its appearance to that of what a writing process should appear like. It lists all the steps in my writing process.

Paragraph 3:
This paragraph describes the way my writing process smells.
It uses a story from when i was younger to explain why my writing process smells the way it does, and how this smell became a part of my writing process.

Paragraph 4:
This paragraph tells how my writing process sounds.
It uses descriptive sensory words to help the reader hear the sounds.

Paragraph 5:
This paragraph explains how not doing the steps in my writing process throws me off.
It uses an example to help support my reasoning.

Paragraph 6:
This paragraph reiterates how my writing process is physically described.
It explains the reasoning for describing the writing process this way by mentioning Elbow's liberal beliefs on the writing process.